The Adventures of Bob and Bill in Hawaii
by Henry, 4th grade
Bob and Bill were stranded on the playground. They were weary and tired because they were playing soccer and their ball popped. The playground was old and broken. The swing sets were rusted. They were sweating so hard they smelled like old sneakers. Bob decided to go to sleep. Then Bill had an idea.
“How about we go to Hawaii?” Bill bellowed.
“Amazing idea,” Bob shouted.
When they both got to Bill’s house they both smelled like rotten tofu. They both took a shower and told their parents they we’re going to Hawaii. Then Bob noticed that someone was spying on them. He told Bill that a person was spying on them and they should be careful on their trip. Bob also told Bill what the spy looked like. The spy looked tall, buff, brown eyes, enormous head, dark glasses, a dark hat, and a cape that was a collage of black, white, and red.
When Bob and Bill got to O’Hare, the spy was not in sight. When they got to the airplane Bob took out the two tickets and they weren’t there! Instead there was a piece of paper and it said, BEWARE!! It was so big when your eyes saw the writing that your eyes would pop out and roll away. “Bill,look at this. My tickets are gone!”
“Oh that’s a phony,” Bill replied.
“No really,” Bob whispered. Bill came over and took a look at the piece of paper.
“Oh my gosh, that is real. I bet the person who is spying on us, took our tickets.” The person at the ticket booth said that there would be a plane ride at 11 am. So Bill bought two tickets for the plane ride at 11 am.
When it was 11 am they got up and went to the ticket booth. They gave their tickets to the person at the ticket booth and got on the plane. The plane ride was long and boring. To cut off time, they both slept. When they got to Hawaii, they were sweating so hard because it was dry, hot and no shade. After they got their luggage they picked up their rental car and drove off to the five star hotel.
When they got to the hotel they were amazed by it. The hotel was made of marble and gold. There were three swimming pools and gourmet food. Also their rooms were awesome! They had two king sized beds and their bathroom was like a king sized bathroom. But the room service was extremely expensive. A can of soda was $10! After Bill and Bob unpacked they really wanted to go to the beach so they got into their car and drove to the beach.
When they got to the beach, no one was in sight! They had an awesome time. They went surfing, swimming and even skin-diving. When they got so tired they were about to fall asleep they went to the hotel and took a nap.
After they got up, they were dying hot and went for a swim. The hotel had the most amazing water park. It had 10 slides and they were really steep. They had a ball!
When they finished swimming they saw the same person spying on them so they decided to follow him. Then the man dashed off. It was a very close chase. When Bob and Bill suddenly stopped, Bill whispered, “I think he is far away now.” “Stop where you are,” murmured the spy. He was shadowing Bob and Bill and handcuffed both of them. The spy took both of them to his hideout.
At the hideout they were hanged. The spy’s gang was planning to move out, so they were packing up. The spy had a huge gang of ten people. “Yo, I need some help outside. The truck is stuck in some sort of mud,” shouted the chief of the gang. The whole gang went outside and left their shotguns. When they were nowhere in sight, Bob and Bill broke free and got the shot guns and went outside to arrest the whole gang. “Stand where you are and don’t move,” barked Bill and Bob. They rounded up the whole gang!
When Bob and Bill got to the police station, they got a reward of $10,000 each! When Bob and Bill got home, their parents were very proud of them. Bob and Bill had an outrageous party and invited all their friends. Bob and Bill spent all their money on their next trip, to the Himalayas.
The End!
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