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The Surprise

by Balkyees , 5th grade

            Everyone was awake except for me.  I was in my bed, asleep with thin sheets covering me on a summer day.  I woke up and leisurely walked toward the door, then marched towards my sister’s room.  My sister was jumping up and down.  Why the excitement? I thought.
            I ate breakfast with my big family.  The pancakes were delicious, with the syrup.  Pretty soon my dad came into the room. 
            “Dad?” I said.
            “Yes?”
            “What’s that in your hand?”
            “Well, it’s the food for Six Flags, so we can eat lunch there.”
            “Six Flags!” I screamed.  “We’ve never been since 2nd grade summer break.”  I had the biggest smile on.
            “Well then get dressed, what are you waiting for?”
            As I hurried to my room to get dressed I heard this funny noise.  “Tick, tick.”  There it was again.  It was coming from my closet.  I opened my closet and my sister jumped out.  I think she was trying to scare me. 
            “Get out!” I screamed.  She quickly ran out.  I changed from pajamas into comfortable clothes.  We all soon got into the car.  When we got there, we went on a scary roller coaster, and my dad said, “The fun just began.”

 

 

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