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The Billowing Sail (an excerpt)

by Mohammed , 7th grade

“Come on.  We have to go check out the city.  You can’t waste your visit sitting around,” my uncle said.
            The Toyota SUV had a DVD player, but it was of little use in a car packed with 7 people, the radio on full blast and my father taping with a video camera.  The drive was not as exciting as I had anticipated.  All I saw was sand and trees for miles.  This is what you call boring. 
            “This is the beginning of town,” my uncle said. 
            I peered out the window.  A tall building was barely visible in the distance. 
            “Is that the entire town?”  I asked.
            “No,” he exclaimed, “of course not.  We still have a mile to go to see any large buildings.”
            Just as I thought it couldn’t get any more boring, I saw a group of camels walking down the side of the road.  This was the first time I had seen a camel- and they were in the wild!  
            “What are camels doing here in a city like this?”
            “They live here,” my mother replied, “and you will see some on the beach in town.”  Wow, this place is not as boring as I thought. 
            We arrived in the city just as the sun reached its zenith.  The scene was breathtaking.  In sharp contrast to the desert, every single inch was inhabited by technology.  Five-star hotels were on every block.  I was appalled at how modern it was compared to the houses on the outskirts of town.  The beach was the most striking.  It was so peaceful and calm.  I rode a camel on the beach- a huge creature, and pretty smelly too.  We fired off a few fireworks down by the shore and watched a water-skier do acrobatics. 
But the most exciting part was viewing the Burj-al-Arab, the “Star of Arabia.”  It was elegant down to its’ shape- a billowing sail.  The lobby was crowded with tourists wearing the finest clothes.  I asked my uncle why all of the people seemed so rich.  “It’s because it is very expensive to stay here.  Just to get inside, you have to pay $7000.”  I was amazed anybody could afford such luxury at a price like this.  But alas, time played its toll, and we had to leave.  The trip was not useless, for I had seen my first resort town- Dubai, Home of the Star.

 

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